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Default Why Most People Fail In Their Online Business - 06-12-2008, 12:05 PM

Why Most People Fail In Their Online Business

I've written a piece on my blog, today, on why I feel most people fail in business on the internet.

I realise it could, and invariably is, the same for offline businesses, but talking about online will resonate more with people on this medium.

Anyway, I hope you guys can add more to it and maybe give more pointers/reasons why the failure rate is so high.

Thanks.
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Default Re: Why Most People Fail In Their Online Business - 06-12-2008, 01:36 PM

rezbi,

I liked your article a lot; there's just one thing I would change.

I think it would help to repeat the headline somewhere in the post, and insert a few lines that relate the text of the post to your main point - why most people fail in their online business.

For example, something like:

So how does all this relate to your online business?

A business takes hard work.

Et cetera. (Add a couple of specifics.)

I hope that helps.

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Default Re: Why Most People Fail In Their Online Business - 06-12-2008, 04:44 PM

Hey Ayla,

Thanks for your comment.

Just wondering, I put the headline at the beginning of the post, but I guess that's not what you mean?

Do you mean integrate it as a part of the post?
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Default Re: Why Most People Fail In Their Online Business - 06-12-2008, 05:00 PM

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Hey Ayla,

Thanks for your comment.

Just wondering, I put the headline at the beginning of the post, but I guess that's not what you mean?
I'm just saying that you start the article (blog post) with "Why Most People Fail In Their Online Business" but then don't mention it in the post.

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Do you mean integrate it as a part of the post?
Right. Plus a few lines helping the reader understand how the post relates to it.

I hope that helps,

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