Hi Fellow members of this board,

I wrote a kickbutt sales letter for the copy contest by Dr. Kilstein.

Dr.Harlan's Weight Loss Sales Letter Contest - by Edward "The Apu"

I am willing to sell it to the highest bidder.

If you are the highest bidder, I will rework it to reflect your product.

Needless to say there are some bonus available too,

This will be online for the next 5 days and after that I will remove it.

Bid ONLY if you are serious about using it.

Let the race begin now

--Edward "The Apu"

Uh Edward...

Hate to break it to you but....

You can't sell this letter.

Please PM me for details or look at the original contest rules.

Thanks.

Harlan

Ok Doc,

Now that the winner is announced, can you please do a critique on my sales letter?

Dr.Harlan's Weight Loss Sales Letter Contest - by Edward "The Apu"

And,

Maybe the moderators can move this thread to the critique request forum,

At least I can learn from you and others,

--Edward "The Apu"

Repost in the crit section and I'll gladly rip it to pieces.