Friends,

You are masters of Direct Response;
I am not. I am a student of many
practitioners, and far from a master
here.

However, I know a thing or two about
what a basic landing page should do...
like GIVE SOMETHING AWAY in exchange
for an email address.

My buddy says he's doing that, which he
does if you find your way to downloading
his free game...

Sea Rats! - That Pirate Game :: Best board game on the high seas!

In my first business book which comes out on
monday, I discuss this site briefly on page 80

I was kind and gentle and I'm promoting the
game... but my friend wanted me to really
compliment his site.

If you go to the above link, maybe you can
help my buddy Rich out with how his site could
be more effective at getting folks to download the
free game

Thank you for your notes and your consideration.

For your review...
Sea Rats! - That Pirate Game :: Best board game on the high seas!

PLEASE NOTE... My tone has changed.

With gratitude,

Ben
Copywriters Board