Wanted: Evil, Twisted And Cruel Copychief - Page 2

maximus · **Re: Wanted: Evil, Twisted And Cruel Copychief -** 06-16-2008, 09:09 PM

Thanks for your comments guys, im going to take your guys advice, hit the yellow pads again and see what I can come up with.

Your advice was really great John, im going to start digging for ways to connect my customer to the headline and start thinking of ways to call out a very specific person in the headline.

CarlJ · **Re: Wanted: Evil, Twisted And Cruel Copychief -** 06-19-2008, 08:34 PM

I liked best:
How To Change Your Life - Now

I liked:
How To Accomplish Everything You Wished You Had Done In The Next 68 Days
Why Haven't We Been Told These Facts About Successful People

The others felt bland or empty. These arouse my curiosity instead of making me feel stupid. I'd try:

How to Change Your Life--Right Now--With These Facts we Haven't Been Told About Successful People.

Still not good enough, but you get the idea.

Best of luck,

CJ

CarlJ · **Re: Wanted: Evil, Twisted And Cruel Copychief -** 06-19-2008, 08:39 PM

Hadn't read the other replies. Notice how alike my suggestion and Mike Humphreys's are.

Mike:

"Here's How To Achieve Your Goals -- Right Now -- and Start Enjoying the Lifestyle You've Always Dreamed About..."

Mine:

How to Change Your Life--Right Now--With These Facts we Haven't Been Told About Successful People.

You may be onto something.

CJ