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| Member    |  Re: Your Help Needed Please for my new Full Page ad -
05-15-2008, 06:07 PM
My initial reponse is, "its too good to be true." How in the world can I make calls for free. Is there anything you can tell me that will overcome that skepticism? "Helping direct mail marketers improve their ROI with creative, unique and clutter busting 3D Mail products and grabbers." |
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| Grand Master  | Re: Your Help Needed Please for my new Full Page ad -
05-15-2008, 06:23 PM
I guess one of the problems I have with this ad overall is: why would I switch from my current flat rate phone plan that includes long distance for no extra charge--and go for this? I think the plan I have is pretty standard these days. So if your offer is better...you'll have to persuade me. |
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| Junior Member | Re: Your Help Needed Please for my new Full Page ad -
05-15-2008, 08:04 PM
Thank you everyone for your comments and suggestions. I changed the headline again to "All My Long Distance Calls are FREE" as if the guy in the ad is screaming that. Does this headline work better? You can see the new ad here freedist_fullpg3 Wayne |
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