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| Junior Member   |  Re: Critize; A Copy Calling On Foreign Investors -
05-12-2008, 07:58 AM
I UNDERSTAND ALL WHAT U SAID ABOUT NIGERIA, AND ITS REALLY GIVING PEOPLE LIKE ME A LOTTA PROBLEM. NYWAYZ, CHECK THIS OUT; BREAKING NEWS! 345 NEWLY DISCOVERED ACRES OF OILDEPOSITS IN NIGERIA CONTRACT OPPORTUNITIES FOR FOREIGN OIL COMPANIES TO START WORK IMMEDIATELY! ( NOT A SCAM! CHECK OUT DOCUMENTARY ON WWW.CNN.COM/NIGERIAOILS) VIRTUALLY ALL FOREIGN COMPANIES LIKE SHELL, CHEVRON....ETC.........ARE NOW SMILING TO THE BANK AFTER GETTING CONTRACTS FROM THE LUCRATIVE NEWLY DISCOVERED OIL DEPOSITS. CONTRACT OPPORTUNITIES IN DRILLING, REFINING, STORING ............................AND LOTS MORE THE ECONOMIC POLICIES ARE MILD ON FOREIGN COMPANIES. 100 FOREIGN COMPANIES NEEDED TOI START WORK IMMEDIATELY. HOW READY ARE YOU TO WORK ON THIS LUCRATIVE LAND! CALL ..............................NOW TO BOOK A PLACEMENT |
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| Junior Expert | Re: Critize; A Copy Calling On Foreign Investors -
05-12-2008, 12:26 PM
Yicob, Great that you've handled the "credibility" objection. But go back and re - read Sarah's and Eric's comments about the overall copy. If you take all their advice - it really will help the Promotion. Steve |
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