Regarding the credibility - could you get a Doctor or some other professional, to endorse everything for you?

And is it possible to get a celebrity to further endorse everything?

Could you get lots more testimonials - maybe with a bit more impact than the ones you have.

And possible use a powerful subhead or deck copy with really hard hitting "reason why's" they should read the letter.

Just a few thoughts.

Steve

WOW... thank-you all so much for the comments to date... it gives me a lot to work on.

If you have any other comments please send them along...

I wish everyone of you all the best for helping out a rookie in need.

Cheers.

Mark,

It's our pleasure.

We were all "rookies" once (blimey I hate that word) - let's all just be copywriters.

Anyway at one time or another we all needed a bit of help with a Promo.

Steve

thanks Mike!

REGARDING: Advice Pleeeease??? I Am So Frustrated...

I have reworked my first index page at http://www.easeoutoffear.com/page1.htm

Is it any better now???

Thanks again to all that provided feed back.