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Default Sales email for affiliates - 05-03-2008, 09:27 AM

I'm writing some copy for my affiliates to send out.

How this?

How to build your website...

Many people have asked Chris Sherrod how he created his
AbundanceUnlimited.com website.

They keep asking...

- How much did it cost you to create that website?

- What software do you use?

- How do you pick out a good hosting company?

- How do you find a good domain name?

- What's a content management system?

- How do I create a squeeze/bonus page?

- How do you podcast?

Chris learned all this over the years. He's been on the Interent since 1989 and after helping launch American Express' first Internet product he has been creating websites. He knows what he's doing.

Well, for the first time he has released videos of how he does it.

[Affiliate link]

Free open source software + videos = Expert Website

Chris precisely show how to do every step. There is over 100 minutes of video on every single step. Watch the videos over and over. Tweak your website and save thousands of dollars.

Chris shows it all.

[Affiliate link]

Start building your website.

[Your name]

P.S. Chris' videos are for people that want to do it themselves. If this is you then take action now and get these videos now. Since Chris spills so much he may raise the cost in the future. Go get them now.

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Default Re: Sales email for affiliates - 05-09-2008, 10:48 PM

I think your biggest problem here is that there are already a hundred and 55 thousand products that show people these same things.

So you can polish the copy up all you want, but the 'what you get out of this' is the biggest draw-back.

If this is the best you have to offer (I'm not downing your product--I'm just saying that if you can't put some really unique pitches in your list of benefits) then your best bet is to focus this copy on niches.

Don't tell people how they can make their own websites--tell basket weavers how they can take their sales online.

Of course, I'm not sure how this would tie in with your affiliates. Hopefully, they've all got their own niches and they can adjust the copy accordingly. Otherwise, I think you need to refocus the product on something that has a little more kick to it.
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