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Default My friends sales copy. - 02-21-2008, 07:41 PM

My friend just launched his product today.

Lucky enough for me, he gave me a preview copy of his guide.

So, I was eager to see his sales copy!

Then I the copy, I do not think the copy does the guide any justification. In my eyes.

So, I was wondering what some you talented people think, about his copy.

First off, the headline put me off instantly. What do you think?

Here is the link:

www.wordpressgoldmine(dot)com
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Default Re: My friends sales copy. - 02-21-2008, 07:49 PM

I'm getting a "Page Can't Be Displayed" message when I click on the link.

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So, I was wondering what some you talented people think, about his copy.
A more important question is, how did the page convert?

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Default Re: My friends sales copy. - 02-21-2008, 07:56 PM

Ya I didn't want to leave a link here in the forum. Just copy and place in browser and replace dot with a .
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