Hello,

I put together a rough draft sales letter for my investing newsletter.



Give me your honest opinions, don't hold any punches.

I took a look at the page and it is very hard to read, I would change the font and add more white space.

Secondly, there is not enough proof, it is not believable at all. Show me screencaps of bank or trading statements, with the account numbers blacked out of course.

Lastly, in looking at your headline, the $1,000,293 actually looks like a small number because it looks so similar to $1,000. You need to definitely change that as well.

I'd like to make a suggestion.

It's called, Avoiding Jail and huge fines.

Your website does not have the required SEC disclaimer.

Minimum $25,000 fine.

Take the web page down.

Now!

Peace.

Harlan

Now THAT is a money saving suggestion! You need to send him a bill.