Will Trade Your Critique For A $67 Course

David Ledoux · 02:28 PM

Hi guys its David Ledoux. I just bought another internet company around Christmas and it's website is atrocious.

I need some skilled eyes to help me with the sales letter. I have a programmer ramping Google Optimizer on it but I want a quick hit to boost conversions ASAP.

If you can help me I'll be happy to give you a copy of my digital course The Ultimate MLM Blueprint For Massive Success, a $67 value.

Here's the link to the site:

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Thanks!

David Ledoux
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Raydal · **Re: Will Trade Your Critique For A $67 Course -** 01-20-2008, 11:46 AM

Hi David,

I'd suspect the reason why no one has responded to your request is because
you promised a $67 reward. That's basically an insult to a copywriter who
makes 20 times that for a critique.

You may fare better if you just ask for help rather than promise a reward.

-Ray L. Edwards

David Ledoux · **Re: Will Trade Your Critique For A $67 Course -** 01-20-2008, 07:39 PM

Hi Ray, thanks for your input. Didn't mean to insult you, sorry if you were offended by it. I've heard of you, I know you've got mad skills.

Actually, I've received 3 responses so far from my posting, one of them astounding!

I suspect that one of the reasons I've received help is that my course that I've been giving as a reward has the breakdown of how I wrote a sales letter that brought in $1.4 MM from 1 website. I threw in a bonus on how I wrote copy that got me mentioned in 3 New York Times best sellers. And for fun I threw in a bonus on how I wrote copy that earned me as much as $25,000 a speech when I was on the circuit with guys like Robert Allen, Denis Waitley, Brian Tracy, and the like. Plus ad copy and direct mail pieces I used to build a $15 million a year business while in my twenties.

I know that you know a thing or two about writing 7 figure copy Ray. Thanks for taking the time to comment on my post.

Oh, and the great news? I found a young guy here on this board willing to waive his fees to work for a slice of the profits on that business as we grow it. I'm so glad I made the post...I'm constantly on the hunt for fresh young talent to join my team.

Have a sensational week!

David Ledoux
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