Were you looking for critique of your copy??? I couldn't find any on the page.
If you're involved in that market, then you must have some idea of what it is that drives clients. Perhaps use something the competition DOESN'T do or something extra you do that makes your clients really like you. It needs reworking, because as it stands, the reader doesn't see much of any reason to choose you.
If anything, take the '40 doctors can't be wrong' thing and put it at the top. Maybe tweak it a little.
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40 Local Doctors Have Complete Faith In Us And Thousands Of Their Clients Are Now Fully Recovered Because Of Us! |
But really, even this is lacking. Think to yourself, "What is a potential client looking for if they haven't decided which therapist to use?" Answer this question, within the first words of your site, and you'll at least be on the right track.