Okay, this is a 13 page Powerpoint slide which I will be using to capture onscreen (with Camtasia, but of course) with a voiceover to guide the prospects through the presentation.

Like to admit that I ain't some weight loss expert but I did read up thoroughly on the product I am promoting. Bought the product as well.

The product's actual sales letter is over at [link removed]

Here's the link to download the slide

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Look forward to some valuable input

PS: I will be removing the link as soon as I have enough critiques to get me going

PPS: I am quite uncertain about what I wrote on page 9... watcha tink?

I thought it was pretty good...

I've got to ask about the main sales letter.

It's been talked about on other forums, but I would
to hear what you have to say. This sales letter
"breaks all the rules" - in terms of layout, design,
short pages vs. long pages, etc...

Obviously - it's a big winner.

I'm curious about a few things:

1. Have they/you tested this versus
the classic long scrolling site?

2. One big benefit of this layout is
that you can do a LOT of testing on each
page and see what gets people to read on...
I posted this on these boards months ago
and I got shot down. I think there's MASSIVE
benefits to this strategy.

Anything else you can add would be awesome.
I just think this sales process is an awesome anomaly
worth studying. Obviously, no one can add better
insights than you.

Thanks in advance,
Matt