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| New Member   |  Are you in a Christmas mood? I'd love your thoughts -
12-05-2007, 06:03 PM
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| Master  | Re: Are you in a Christmas mood? I'd love your thoughts -
12-05-2007, 06:43 PM
The title of this thread is deceptive. Not cool. Since it's in the critique section, I'm assuming you want some feedback. You've got too many colors on this site. It's not visually appealing at all. The headline needs work. It's too cut and dry. I like the video. It's much more compelling than the copy. You've got a good product here. Just make the site more visually appealing. It looks amateur, but your video is pretty good. However, I'd be tempted to click off the site before I got there. I hope this helps. |
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