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Default My New Look Ezine... Opinions - 11-11-2003, 11:13 AM

Been giving my ezine some thought for a while now and decided to try and get away from the same look as everyone else.

One reason for it was if they had graphics set to off or only using text the message would appear the same.

Another reason for the style was simply to offer a tip not another 20 million word ezine. Anyway gang let me know if you like it. If you do ... I love you all. If you dont ... watch out!

Its supposed to look like me by the way... rough and ready.

Here it is...
http://www.orangebeetle.com/notepad-bullets.htm


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Default Re: My New Look Ezine... Opinions - 11-11-2003, 01:36 PM

Alan,
Hi, I liked your graphics and the scholarly look of your newsletter. Nice job formatting, etc. The only thing that put me off was seeing "hire me" several times. Once is enough, otherwise it seems overdone or desperate.
Nice job, though, overall!
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Default Re: My New Look Ezine... Opinions - 11-26-2003, 05:13 PM

both the newsletter and your site are nice. well done.

i dont think hireme that there is hireme anything wrong hireme with telling hireme people to hire you. isnt that hireme what you want them to do?

i say leave it in
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