Hasn't been up long enough to tell you conversion numbers yet, but... have a go if you wish.

Thanks in advance!

JP Maroney's Cash Flow Catalysts System Training!

JP:

Don't have time for a full critique yet, but one minor point.

There is an inconsistency in how you physically reference your testimonials. In some (e.g., John Anghelache) there is no space between the quote and the person giving it.

In others (Ricky Breslin), there is a space after the quote.

And in others (Shaune Clarke), you bold the name of the person giving the testimonial.

It would be easier on the eyes to make it consistent... and my vote would be to put a space after the testimonial, and then right-justify the speaker's information.

I would also put punctuation after each of your bullet points. Because technically each bullet is the second half of a complete sentence. "On this call you will learn... how to x, y, z."

Other than that, at first glance... very impressive.

JP can I respectfully ask what the "Mr. Monetizer" is meant to imply to the prospect?

No.... you can't ask questions!

LOL

If it's not clear, then perhaps you should finish your statement. Feel free to offer your two cents, at least on how it's used in the letter.

For me, it's a minor mention of an overall branding I'm undergoing.

Cool.

Well when I first saw it used in connection with your name, quite honestly I wasn't sure what the word meant.

Seeing it used within the context of your marketing piece it appears that it is implying that you have some sort of expertise at helping someone find or create capital. Is that correct?

Sort of... in a broad sense.

But...

Hey JP,

I think overall your copy is great, but the pricing at the top of your order page differs from the rest of the site.

It's $47 in the cart and everywhere else, but $77 on the order page.

Cheers,

Steve

fixed - thx

Got an email from Michael Senoff today.

At the sig line he always has:

I actually like the way he does it. Makes me want to give him a call and ask him to send me a few thousand dollars (or advice on how he can make me a few thousand with his knowledge on marketing).