Hi all,
I am looking to make some improvements to the copy on my site and was wondering if anyone had any opinions on how to improve it. The site is Wu Yi Source - Home it has been running for about 6 months now and I have been running split test after split test. We are beginning to approach the point where winning split tests now are hard to come by. Please review my copy to see if there is any improvements that you might make to boost conversions. It would be greatly appreciated
Thank You,
Jesse

Have you...

1. Tested the page without the header at the top.

2. Tested the page with a dark background AROUND the page (eg. black).

3. Tested putting captions under the images with a call to action.

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4. Tested getting rid of the right hand column and putting the extra testimonials in a P.S. at the end with a "Claim Your Tea Now" link every screen.

5. Tested changing your black "Order now" to Claim Your Tea Now in a blue underlined link.

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Andrew Cavanagh

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Hello Jesse,

After scanning your site, I'd get rid of your Mega-Headline and start your salespage off with this (from your sales page)

"Just 2 Cups of Tea a Day for Fast Weight Loss!"

Everything before this statement didn't grab me. Lead with the above and you'll have improved your page 200%!

You should also use the body copy after that headline as well.

-- Rachel

Yes, without the header, without the sub-header.

Try, people on top and headline below them.
Try, without walk-on video.
Try the same page, removing each element completely, including paragraphs, etc.

heres a few things to test.

after your "14 days free" box, there is a huge white space. Id get rid of it.

Your header graphic and and the one at the top that reads "easy weight lose tea". Remove them both entirely. This includes the pics of the mountains as well. All of it. Let your readers read your headline FIRST.

Your links up top that read "home contact us FAQ PUT THEM AT THE BOTTOM. Its to early and invite procrastination.

Test putting your guarantee in writing (make sure you use good handwriting)

your pps is weak. Test repeating your guarantee here. Some people will scroll down and read this pps before anything else.