Hi,

I am new to this board and before I ask my question I want to say hi to all.

I recently had a min-site done for my new Ebook/Guide and I am getting traffic but no sales and I realize my sales copy sucks and is killing my sales. http://www.untapped-profits.com/index2.htm

I have been given good feedback on ebook but sales just not materializing so I would appreciate your feedback on my attempt at writing a sales copy. Now I know some will say to hire a pro and I agree but as a single dad raising a 3 yr old alone my budget is limited.

I will appreciate the Good, Bad and Ugly comments about my sales page.

Thanks

John

Dirt Poor, Single Father of 3-Year Old Girl Stumbles upon Google Ad Word Secrets That X, Y and Z'ed His Business

He no longer wonders where the rent money is gonna come from...

and,

I would not have the ad written by you. Have it written by a friend that BEGGED you to allow them to put it on-line or something similar.

Be the struggling dad turned reluctant hero whose 3 - year old will NEVER have to worry about money...

-- Jason Bedunah