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Default RAW Illuminatus: Too Hot for ClickBank! - 08-18-2007, 09:02 AM

We were selling fine on ClickBank, then BOOM!

our sales page is no longer appropriate...

:: fnord ::

Critique request... In what ways might we make
this ClickBank compatible?
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Default Re: RAW Illuminatus: Too Hot for ClickBank! - 08-18-2007, 02:59 PM

Ben,

Full disclosure: In no way do I represent myself as being fluent with ClickBank's TOS.

The only thing I can figure is the "self incriminating" nature of some of the copy may have tripped CB's alarms.

"I am just about certain someone will have this site shut down within hours of my posting it"

Just a theory.

Hank

P.S. Cool copy! I'm intrigued anyway!


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Default Re: RAW Illuminatus: Too Hot for ClickBank! - 08-18-2007, 06:29 PM

"The transaction is handled by a company called ClickBank.

If you ask for a refund, they'll give you one. I don't get a choice in the matter.

So you can download the digital book, read it, and decide for yourself if it's written by RAW. If you think it's a hoax, just get your money back.

You could in fact just rip me off and get the book for free that way.

I really don't care."

ClickBank is getting a reputation (well deserved) as being slack on serial refunders so maybe they take offense to you pointing out how easy it is to get free products with Clickbank in the sales letter.
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Default Re: RAW Illuminatus: Too Hot for ClickBank! - 08-22-2007, 03:37 PM

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ClickBank is getting a reputation (well deserved) as being slack on serial refunders so maybe they take offense to you pointing out how easy it is to get free products with Clickbank in the sales letter.
Nick, thank you. That may be it. However, it could also be that somebody complained to them that the product was connected to this press release...


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The Number 23 = Satanic Code
New Jim Carrey movie illustrates latent Satanic “fnords” in Dan Brown’s
The DaVinci Code through Illuminati references


Summary: Joel Schumacher's soon to be released movie The Number 23 staring Jim Carrey and Virginia Madsen is laden with active mind viruses called “fnords” in satanic vernacular.


Troy, NY (February 19, 2005) – fYf Active Media, a distributor of quality arts and letters via new mediums, announced today the acquisition of a verified Illuminati manuscript entitled The Number 23, written by the recently deceased Robert Anton Wilson (January 18, 1932 – January 11, 2007). Wilson, a self-proclaimed Satanist, has been the greatest literary promoter of 23rdian iconography of the 20th Century. Wilson’s The Number 23 will be available through CODED NAME on 2/23/07 (http://inbubblewrap.com/).

Many people believed Dan Brown’s The DaVinci Code (Doubleday, 2003) is harmless entertainment. However, new material from known Satanist Robert Anton Wilson reveals a special form of toxic idea known as a fnord, embedded all throughout Dan Brown’s The DaVinci Code.
“Previews of the movie The Number 23 definitively show the most devious form of mind viruses known to communications experts as a fnord. Don’t see this movie if you value your sanity or the safety of your soul.”
--Ben Mack
American Marketing Association award winning author
Author of Think Two Products Ahead (Wiley, 2007)

The day before Robert Anton Wilson died, 1/10/07, he emailed Ben Mack an unusual manuscript with an email that read:
“My Dearest Ben, If something happens to me and I die suddenly, I want you to know of the extraordinary importance of the transcript I just finished reading. I wish this to be called The Number 23. Memetics, Shannon, Fuller and the Internet paint world politics in a way not previously visible, but once glimpsed, is indelibly seared—combining natural philosophy with storytelling—the effect is like taking acid, only you never come down. Please publish without delay. Sincerely, Robert Anton Wilson”

Robert Anton Wilson’s manuscript titled The Number 23 makes a clear connection between the numeral 23 and satanic tools. It would be naïve to believe that this number would be bandied about so prominently without this knowledge.

ABOUT Ben Mack

Ben Mack is a recovering advertising executive and master of perception—former Senior Vice President, Director of Brand Strategy for BBDO and WestWayne; Magic Castle award winning magician; interviewer of Buckminster Fuller for the St. Martin’s Press book Fuller’s Earth; former memeticist for WONGDOODY Advertising.

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CODED NAME (jCX) is our way to share this love (wrapped CODED NAME) with you.

jCX is a site dedicated to giving you the opportunity to win FREE business related prizes. Each day (Monday – Friday) brings a new contest with new prizes for you to win. All prizes are business related whether it’s the latest set of business books, nifty office supplies or advice from a business book author.


ABOUT fYf Active Media & tUbSf NETWORK
The tUbSf Network is a decentralized affiliation of Non-Prophet Organizations dedicated to the distribution of quality arts and letters via new mediums. The network is comprised of blogs, SMS, and rich media for cellular platforms, on demand print, merchandising, video and audio sources, A.R.G. networks (Alternate Reality Gaming) and virtually any other “X” factor of media that you can think of. You may already be a member. For more information, visit www.fYf-active coded name dot com

I RECEIVED SIX RADIO INTERVIEW REQUESTS IN THE 2 HOURS BEFORE PRWEB PULLED THIS PRESS RELEASE.

Our government, as most governments do, employs people to tell heart wrenching stories through mass media.

do you wonder why i would do this? I've been a 23rdian for years and then this movie comes along and gives a meaning to our calling that has NOTHING to do with what we are about.

the radio interviews were a lot of fun
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