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Default Copywriting Titans Wanted-Very Hard Critique Only 2 lines! - 01-14-2005, 02:11 PM

Hey Guys, (winner will get lotsa smiley's from me!)


I'd be grateful for any assistance I could get with a critique. A successful client of mine introduced me to a unique affiliate program recently. They make a tonne of money from the program as do thousands of their clients. Without getting into much detail, I was hoping some of you can make suggestions to help me with one of the viral marketing tools (an email signature) that is used to expand the revenue potential for affiliates.


My current email signature is:

"If you own a website and would like to make a GUARANTEED minimum $150 to $25,000 per month, visit http://www.bestaffiliateprogram.cc/002382692436/ now."

I can’t help think there is a better signature that could pull a better click through rate. This signature does fine, but as a copywriter, I know it’s possible with some brainstorming to really increase the click rate substantially.

Before you submit your suggestions, here is some background info that may help you in your critique:

-- The affiliate program is unique. No other program anywhere like it because...

-- The program generates both additional traffic for its affiliates sites and additional revenue separate and apart from the site owners own sources of income (i.e., there is a double benefit to joining).

-- Unlike most affiliate programs, participants know at the time of signing the bare minimum long-term revenue they can make over a 24-month period.

-- Other programs only pay on one to three levels of affiliate sales, this program pays to 15 tiers, which is why in the long-run, even ultra low traffic website owners do quite well. Many are pulling upwards of
$100k/year. Higher traffic sites are pulling 7 figure+ per year revenues from this program.

-- Other affiliate programs are based on revenue earned by one company for a single product or two sold, then a percentage of that revenue made from your site is paid to you (the affiliate).

This company’s revenues are derived from dozens of different companies and a huge range of services sold. Therefore, affiliates don’t just make money based on whatever links they place on their site, but they can make revenue from 100’s of different types of services and products sold, across a diversified 15 tier network of affiliates, each of whom has links placed on their site maximized to increase the revenue of the entire affiliate network.

This why this company can offer minimum revenue guarantees and no other company does. Of course not all website owners can get approved to be in the program.

-- Most affiliate companies pay commissions on services costing in the 10 to $500 range. This program has services and business deals that occur which can be in the hundreds of thousands of dollars per month to many
millions of dollars per month (as a result of links on affiliates sites). Ergo, the commissions can be large not just because the program pays on 15 tiers, but also because aside from all the smaller ticket sales that occur, as with any affiliate program, an affiliate could earn a 4 to 5 figure per month commission of a single transaction on any one of its 15 affiliate tiers.



So these are some of the main differences between this affiliate program and others.

So how would you condense all of this into one or two lines (three or four tops)?

Group brainstorming has paid off well for me in the past, so I would definitely appreciate any alternative signatures you can come up with. It will be used as my e-mail and my auto responder singnature.

Thanks!
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