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Post Outsourcing report sales letter - Need review. - 03-12-2007, 12:25 AM

Hi,

I'm about to launch a product called the Outsourcing and Product Management Report. I'd like to get the sales copy reviewed by a few experts over here. Could you please give me feedback on it.

Here's the sales letter:

Outsourcing and Project Management Guide

Thanks in advance.

Raj
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Default Re: Outsourcing report sales letter - Need review. - 03-12-2007, 12:31 AM

Post #1...Asking for a critique already?


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Post Can't I? - 03-12-2007, 02:52 AM

Is it against the rules? I've been following the board for around 3 months now..I joined in Jan 2007.

Sorry if I violated any forum rule.
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Default Re: Can't I? - 03-12-2007, 04:27 AM

Put a line break after "getting" in the heading...

Discover the insider secrets of getting up

... i know how to get up and stopped reading there.
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