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mtheader New Member Posts: 2 Join Date: Jan 2007 Rep Power: 0 Friends: 0	Outsourcing report sales letter - Need review. - 03-12-2007, 12:25 AM Hi, I'm about to launch a product called the Outsourcing and Product Management Report. I'd like to get the sales copy reviewed by a few experts over here. Could you please give me feedback on it. Here's the sales letter: Outsourcing and Project Management Guide Thanks in advance. Raj

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Lance K Master Posts: 977 Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Iowa Rep Power: 3 Friends: 8	Re: Outsourcing report sales letter - Need review. - 03-12-2007, 12:31 AM Post #1...Asking for a critique already? Regards, Lance "If you can lay your head on your pillow each night knowing you gave hundred per cent to your day, success will find you." -- Russell L. Mason

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mtheader New Member Posts: 2 Join Date: Jan 2007 Rep Power: 0 Friends: 0	Can't I? - 03-12-2007, 02:52 AM Is it against the rules? I've been following the board for around 3 months now..I joined in Jan 2007. Sorry if I violated any forum rule.

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Kyle Tully Grand Master Posts: 1,035 Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Sydney, Australia Rep Power: 3 Friends: 9	Re: Can't I? - 03-12-2007, 04:27 AM Put a line break after "getting" in the heading... Discover the insider secrets of getting up ... i know how to get up and stopped reading there. KyleTully.com

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