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Default Critique Mail Out Reminder Cards - 02-27-2007, 09:08 AM

Hi,
Every year our company mails out reminder cards to all of our previous customers. It is postcard size. It's purpose is to get our customers to book new appointments with us and to make them aware that we offer other services. Please click on the link below to view the card and give us any feedback that may help us to make the card better. Thanks.

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Default Re: Critique Mail Out Reminder Cards - 02-27-2007, 10:24 AM

Very weak postcard design. Makes you look like you're running your biz off a kitchen table.







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Default Re: Critique Mail Out Reminder Cards - 02-28-2007, 04:22 PM

Hi Don

The headline is about cleaning windows but the message is about powerwashing then everything else.

I needed a break so I played around with your postcards text. Might be a bit wordy for the postcard?


Your House Needs A Healthy Bath

Because dangerous allergic molds are growing unseen on dirt stuck to the outside walls of your house.

Now easily get mold and dirt - stuck like crazy glue blasted off your house by professional jet force power-home washers.

You’ll be the envy of your neighborhood with the cleanest and healthiest house.

Call now and say, “Yes my house needs a bath”. Hurry... grab our limited time- Healthy House Bath Special.

All Country Window Cleaning
House Bathing, Gutters Cleaned and Windows Sparkling
NJ 973-827-8311 CALL NOW NY 845-986-1188

Cheers


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