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| New Member    |  Please Review the copy for My 1st SITE ...THANKS -
11-11-2004, 04:38 PM
Anything I should edit/change on this to make it better? (Just want to mention, I had it originally written, and then I tweaked it some) www.wholesalersdropshipvault.com I know i misspelled the word "Guarantee" in my "Guarantee" johnson box...I will fix ASAP, and I think I need to explain more what the product actually is, but not sure WHERE I need to put that? It tells more of my story of WHY i created my online source of wholesalers, and not so much why They should want it too... I appreciate any advice. By the way the members area will also contain a HUGE list of articles I will write relating to ebay, selling online, getting started, finding great offline sources, etc.... Where should i include this info? Thanks everyone!   |
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