Hi all, over the past 3-4 years, Ive learned a whole lotta stuff in INet Marketing.....and wanted to have my own infoproduct.

Well here I am.....lots of trialand error....and to come

My site is at http://www.InterviewSecretsExposed.com

My webmaster and freelancer did some of the copy and advanced copywriting stuff for me me being focused on core of the course.

Can you guys please take a look at the site's salesletter and get me some great feedback and comments that'll help me

Thanks everyone

Ali Z.

HI Ali,

I read the first 5 or 6 paragraphs and found the english to be really heavy going - some sentences just didn't make sense. If I was in your target market I would be leaving the page around about now because the writing isn't creating any credibility, and it's not terribly clear what you are trying to communicate.

Hope this helps,
Jane

thanks jane, most of the letter is written by my freelancer....

i'll get back to the letter now ....

thanks for feedback

Ali Z.

I think you need to change the focus of the sales letter from people unemployed looking for a job to "Nailing that dream job interview."

Unemployed don't make very good sales prospects.

Maybe:

Do You Make These Mistakes At A Job Interview?

REVEALED at last!
"Discover How You've Blown Every Job Interview And The Amazing Interview Secrets To Help You Nail That Dream Job!"


The rest of the copy is not terrible but it's not really great either.

And livly hood - livelihood.

I wish you the best of sucess.

Kindest regards,
Andrew Cavanagh

Email me at andrewcavanagh1@bigpond.com if you'd like a few more suggestions.