Hi All,

I did the sales copy for www.adwordgenerator.com It is converting fairly well(1%-3%) depending on the crowd it hits.

I know that it could be much better, however I would like a split tester before I go and change it, so if someone knows of an excellent multi-page tester, I am all ears.

Would love any feedback on this copy. I wish writing came more naturally to me.... It's such a struggle to make something that is both factual and yet compelling.

This site and product will be the catalyst for a new website and product line that I will announce here soon. It will be something I think all of you copywriting geniuses will really be interested participating in. More on that as the time rolls closer....I think around Nov. 20th or so. So stay tuned!

Thanks

Rod

Hey Rod, good to see you the board here... great product...

I would test out a few things..

- format: try putting your body text/pitch in a centered box, like Michel's salesletters from his portfolio, and others.. makes it easier to read vs all in a white sea..

- headline idea:

"You'll Create Sizzling New Google Adwords Campaigns Quickly and Successfully with the Help of AdWordGenerator's 5,127 Hot-Selling Phrases ... Get Better Adwords Online in Just Minutes..!"

Use a specific benefit number, like the 5127 (rem the DVD?) and tie it to a convenience, easy-to-use benefit as well, for the average webmaster, who's likely frustrated, doesn't want to write a lot of ads, and could use some help, a convenient shortcut to get great ideas in place.

Ken
www.writingadwords.com

Hi Ken,

Thanks for the advice...I like the headline. Your DVD is awesome. Will have to watch it again.

BTW, do you know of a solid multipage split tester?


Rod