I will be introducing 2 new products in a few weeks and have created a website to introduce my audience to these two new products.

I would like to get feedback on this new site.

ASAP - The Advanced Sales Action Plan

Any help, ideas, suggestions that anyone has would be appreciated.

Thanks

Dave

Hi Dave,

Your graphics battle for attention with the headline... that's a no, no.

The headline itself is hard to read. Don't know if it's the spread or the drop shadow, or the quality you saved the image at... but it's difficult to read.

The tables around your images, yourself and your audio button should be visually eliminated by making the table's border zero.

Asking questions in headlines is dangerous. Are you SURE the issues you address in your headline ARE the issues your prospects presently face? If not, nix the question. Make the headline benefit laden instead.

when you scroll down, the ebook images are WAY to big. reduce the size.



Those are just some graphical issues I see. You're above the fold definately needs some work. Hope this helps you out.

Takes way too long to load. Whatever the headline is, it won't matter if it takes so long to load. There are three points in the letter where you allow people to click off to learn about products ...each of which has it's own full-length sales letter.

For a test, try to boil down each product into it's essential few basics. Better yet would be where you take those basics and integrate them into the letter for the product you're actually trying to sell.

thanks very much for your input, I have made some of the changes you suggest

Dave