I am 'open' to suggestions and welcome feedback

cgraynz · **I am 'open' to suggestions and welcome feedback -** 10-23-2006, 09:51 AM

Hello,

I have a website based on 'mens issues' which is a serious problem for many men - premature ejaculation.

The website is Premature Ejaculation Solution - Home

I am open to any suggestions so fire away.

It's currently converting at 1.2% as a first attempt.

Thanks

Dale King · 06:30 PM

Your sales letter is converting at 1.2%, right out of the gate, so obviously , there aren't any major problems with it.

I think the letter is fine as is.

However, I would add a tasteful picture of a man and woman making love...you know, the type of pictures you see in those offline "better sex" manuals.

Also, I would change the headline and subhead. Try this:

Men...End the Humiliation and Frustration of Premature Ejaculation!

Last longer in bed...and do it naturally and permanently...while giving your partner the
sex life she's always dreamed of!

John_S · 11:08 AM

Have to agree. You've got a control. Now you have to test a set of things designed to break the control and become your new control.

My suggestion for the picture however is different. I would test a photo with a "It happens to everybody" moment. Guy is looking frustrated. Woman is trying to be supportive.

Dale King · 10-23-2006, 11:17 AM

I forgot to mention, whatever you do, don't make a bunch of wholesale changes all at once.

Otherwise, you won't have an accurate picture of what's actually working and what's not.

Just make one change at a time...test it against your control and adjust accordingly.

Admittedly, this a painstakingly slow process.

But's it's the correct way to test.

Dale King

cgraynz · **Thanks for the great inut -** 10-24-2006, 09:42 AM

Thanks for your time and the great ideas. I have taken them on board and I will see what happens.

tosin · **my take -** 11-02-2006, 06:57 AM

Hi, my quick takes about your site:
1) its too wordy: i need to feel its like going through my personal desktop

2)
"I firmly believe that my Step-by-Step guide is the absolute best, most effective and safest cure for premature ejaculation available today"

people get put off, laugh or think you're bragging when you say you're the best.
they want the latest, fastest etc...don't call it a step-by-step guide, everyone would do that.call it by some interesting process. by doing that you'l project an aura of superiority. it works like magic.

3) your copy shows a clear understanding of the problem. very good.
what you need now is give them free tips on what to do. call it a tease. if it works for them, then congratulations! you have turned your prospects into expects.