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Raydal Senior Expert Posts: 391 Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Michigan, USA Rep Power: 5 Friends: (1)	The Wholesale Drop Shippers Vault - 09-07-2004, 06:57 PM HI All, This is a letter I recently completed. Glad for any comments on any aspect of the letter. http://www.noclicktrafficsecret.com/new/sheila.htm Regards, Ray Edwards http://www.VideoCopywritingCritique.com

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Re: The Wholesale Drop Shippers Vault - 09-08-2004, 08:10 AM

Great !!

Just read through it copy its EXTEMELY compelling, headline and 1st paragraph really gripped me into the copy--like the drama!-, and also like the format you used of the page , to make it look like white paper nice touch
*and can you tell that Sheila lady that i think shes BEAUTIFUL!!!! and can i have her email addy?

Peace Ray

Why do women influence 80% of the worlds wealth?

http://www.the-reasons-why-women-buy.com

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jason wellington Junior Expert Posts: 122 Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: uk Rep Power: 5 Friends: (0)	Re: The Wholesale Drop Shippers Vault - 09-08-2004, 09:32 AM tell her i want to do a special "Joint Venture" with her Why do women influence 80% of the worlds wealth? http://www.the-reasons-why-women-buy.com (under construction.)

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