Hey Everyone,

Phew...Deep breath....Please let me know what you think.

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I've been told the headline could use some more work, so I'd really appreciate some thoughts on that.

I'd be extremely grateful with all of the help I can get with this. I really think this product has good potential, but then again, I'm a little biased.

Please let me know what you think!

Robert

Looks very useful.

The headline is weak and the bonuses also.
I like drop shadow but yours is interfereing.

Bonuses are complimentary products.

Lifetime upgrades could be a mini-bonus added in a PS

The copy could be from say, your wifes voice, to eliminate
the rule #1 violations. (see Library.)

Or else just cut them by half.

Thanks - that means a lot of me. I know this product can help a lot of people. I hope I don't have much convincing to do, but you know how that goes...

And thanks for the feedback - I've certainly got some work to do.

A friend of a friend offered up this headline for me and I may have him do some more work with the rest of the copy. I've attached it. I think it's a great improvement on what I had.

I think that's a pretty good headline.