Dear All,

I am looking to put up a website selling penis enlargement products. They have worked for me and I am now proudly sporting a very large member.

How would you approach such a sales letter if you were planning to resell as opposed to manufacture the prodyuct.

Do you think I might need to show before and after photos, and if so should the be of erect before and afters?

Thanks

Hi and welcome


1) are you to ressel the Product X from Y as a conccurent of Y, isn't this against ethic or law?(in my region it is).

2)I think that in such field the more important testemonial are to get from women.(perhaps I am wrong).

hope that help.

Honnestely I don't know how to do. but feel free to ask Mr Subtile or JAYKAY.

PS:sorry Mr Subtile but I can't forget your Cream.

PPs: I edit my replay because in the first reading I thinked that it was one of My superHeros Idea.

It's about time, this is definitely an underserved niche.

Okay, the approach. You want to start approaching it cautiously... gently. Then you want to massage the copy over and over again to the point of near exhaustion... Then you want your copy to build toward the order mechanism. Sometimes you want to spend extra time massaging the order mechanism. The copy continues to build and build, then suddenly KABOOM... sales shoot through the roof (or at least to the ceiling).



(Hope I didn't offend anyone.)

Warning: don't close your eyes reading tvwriterguy replay else you will miss all the interessting part.

My friend are you to be a conccurent of MR Subtile.

Abdellah, my friend

In virtually every post you make you mention Mr. Subtle. Are you obsessed with Mr. Subtle? Just curious?

Dale King

Dale, my friend.

I am not realy obsesses by Mr Subtile, he is my Heros , realy Idislike to drive this thread out (wonder please forgive me) but I want to say 2 line about him:

1)he make this job humain, he always make others smile, in any family there is some one to get this role (the one that make the house shine, the one that make other smile and make happyness), Mr subtile is this one.

2)I love his swip file, his HD, his talent, and just ask yourself why he changed his pseudo?(humble and modest is this guy).

so please let return now to the mean thread and let help wonder.

Abdellah...I was only joking!

Regarding this particular thread...knock yourself out! I'll pass on commenting.

Dale King

What ever you do, please don't show them here... this is a "family" show and we do have youngsters amongst us.

BTW - I believe if you do a good enough job with your copy, you shouldn't have to "show" anything.

Use the right copywriting techniques and leave your it to the imagination of the reader.

I don't know what angle you're going to take, but I would personally go for the medical side of this and stay away from the profane, NLP-pick up chicks side...

Also, do some good "real" medical research on this subject

My reasoning on this is that there are so many medicines on the market for this and some folks are afraid of the unseen, long-term "side effects" in using them.

Of course, I'm assuming this is not a medicinal/herbal solution and goes more along the lines of a technique or excercise.

You might also want to include a disclaimer like cialis and viagra do:

If your (blah,blah,blah) lasts for more than 4 hours, please consult a physician.

In my opinion, this is done to subliminally make the drug sound more powerful than it really is and not a true "we warned you" type of disclaimer.

BTW - I am no expert on this subject and have no first hand knowledge of this, just thought I would toss in my two cents!

John Carlton was able to pull off Rodale's Sex Letter successfully and elegantly without the use of "oversexed lingo"

You gotta remember that you want to potray yourself as a professional offering solution to perhaps the most sensitive issue amongst mankind and not any "sex maniac" on the streets

Drop me an email taymastery@gmail.com and I'll give you a pdf version of John Carlton Sex Letter