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Default My Biggest Product Launch Ever: Critique? - 08-25-2006, 11:48 AM

Hi all,

I'm doing my most ambitous product-launch ever, a 12-DVD trading system with a colleague of mine, at:

Stock Trading Success System: Prelaunch and Preview Center

Any critique/comments on it?

*be sure to download this kick-butt 8 meg video intro clip:
http://www.stocktradingsuccess.com/S...econdIntro.wmv

I'd appreciate your insights very much.

ESPECIALLY:
#1: What are the UNANSWERED OBJECTIONS/POINTS OF CONFUSION ABOUT WHAT THE HECK THIS IS AND WHY I THE PROSPECT SHOULD CARE ABOUT IT??

#2: Ideas to IMPROVE the Copy Bullets and layout/graphics?


btw the "members' area" login/pass is: L: trading P: success (you can click on the button to login using that, so you don't need to opt in to get it).

So, I'd appreciate any sincere, candid feedback on that prelaunch page... it's been 4+ months of my life working on it this past spring/summer, a significant investment of my time & energy ... (eg the time mostly spent on editing the videos etc, the page there took a couple of weeks to get in publication-ready format).


++ Also, any feedback on this "sign up for the teleseminar" pitch email I just sent out? Any ways to improve, for the next one? Much appreciated, here it is:

(start email)
************************************************** *******

Hi [[name]],

Just a reminder, if you're not already registered to hear Steve
Nison's teleseminar tomorrow with me, this Saturday at Noon EST,
*now's the perfect time* to lock in your spot, at:

Stock Trading Success System: Prelaunch and Preview Center

Just enter your name/email address at the bottom of the
site (if spaces are still available*), and you'll get full access
to the new members' area that we put together for you,
where you'll get teleseminar recordings, video previews
and more...

In Saturday's seminar, Steve will reveal all-new tips for
"Profiting With Candlestick Patterns: What You Don't Know", featuring
brand new trading chart patterns from this past week's volatile
stock trading action on Wall Street - plus how to trade them....

================================================

Here's a small tasty sample of what you'll be learning about
in tomorrow's event:

+ Steve unlocks tips for using candles to gauge market
momentum for COF (and more...)

+ He shows you exactly what signals to use to decide when to
exit longs and shorts for the S&P 500, using this week's
volatile market action...

+ Steve quizzes you on last Wednesday's RIMM chart, with a
stunning new chart pattern

+ You'll also learn Steve's 7 "Must-Ask Questions Before You
Place A Trade", using hidden signals revealed in this past
week's AAPL chart (you've got to see this!)

and much, much more.... it's an exciting event you won't
want to miss!
================================================

It's a must-attend event for *all* active stock traders,
and there's no cost. It's like getting a front-row seat to
Steve's personal coaching, and it's yours -- this Saturday!

Hurry and register now, though - because seats are filling
up fast, and once they're all gone, that's it.

So hurry and register right now. It's a $97 value 60-minute
fast-paced trading "how to" teleseminar, as our gift.

You pay nothing at all. No credit card needed.
Simply enter your name and email address - it's easy!

We'll rush your access information to you by Saturday
morning at 11am EST, so you can hear every valuable
trading tip. Plus a downloadable pdf.

Also -- you'll get to download the mp3 recording of this
teleseminar event in case you can't make the live
teleseminar, but ONLY if you register at the site right now.

We will NOT be making the mp3 recording available
any other way. It's easy, and no cost, so go ahead and
register your spot right now. Hurry, seating's limited!

/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/

Stock Trading Success System: Prelaunch and Preview Center

/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/


See you this Saturday,

Ken Calhoun, President
Daytrading University
888-414-5055


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eSignal "Trading with the Masters", and more...

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P.S. This Saturday's 1-hour Steve Nison teleseminar
is filling up fast, to register f.ree, simply go
enter your name/email address in the form at:

Stock Trading Success System: Prelaunch and Preview Center


*IMPORTANT: If there's no place to enter your
name and email address at the bottom of that
page, it means we've completely booked up
our available teleseminar lines and you can't
participate (sorry).

So please hurry and enter your name/email
address now, to secure your spot. We only
have a limited number of bridge lines available
from our provider.

First come, first served. This email is being
sent to over 7,000 active traders. Don't miss out.

See you there!


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(end email)



thx,

ken calhoun


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Default 08-26-2006, 03:51 PM

hey wow thanks for all the responses, folks.. I'm ah underwhelmed.. anyone want to try and take a crack at it?

much appreciated.

Stock Trading Success System: Prelaunch and Preview Center

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Default 08-26-2006, 04:05 PM

Well, it's kind of overwhelming, Ken -- lotsa stuff to wade through just to be able to give an intelligent opinion on it, I'm guessing that's why people aren't jumping in like they usually do -- I'd like to help, I'll try to make the time later this weekend.


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