Anybody convinced by this website?: www.winaholidayhomeinspain.com. If not, why not? Feedback much appreciated.

No.

The website is a joke.

Who is supervising the lottery to make sure it's above board?

Who are you? Why should anyone believe you will give away the homes?

Your website screams scam.

Shut down your adwords until you adjust your website and give yourself
some credibility.

Why are you raffling your property instead of selling it?

What if there isn't enough interest? Do people get their money back?

What are the tax ramifications of winning in Spain?

Where exactly are the homes?

What's the community like?

yeah.. "what Harlan said" ... he's completely right as usual.

the only way it would seem even More spammy/fake, would be if it had

"Hi my name is Prince Mofumbo from Nigeria. Congratulations! You have just won the chance to get your own house in spain. Kindly send me 20 euros and you will have a chance to own your very own house, too."


come on gimme a friggin break.

this kind of stuff is what makes the internet a bad place. screams spam. who are you? who's sponsoring this? it says "I'm a nobody who has no intention of delivering and I just want to grab as many euros and disappear as soon as possible". I like to report this type of site to the ftc.gov

To make it legit, you'd of course need to partner/jv with an authentic travel agency and have the page on their site, or a genuine realtor, with the same. Otherwise it's a lot of bull****.



ken

I'm curious about what the ramifications and liabilities would be for a copywriter that does a "job" for this website???

It's missing all the normal things.

A great headline focused on a key consumer benifit.
Good, interesting copy focused on benefits.
Minimal Graphics for fast page loading.
Testimonials and credibility building features.
Bullet points.
A Call to action.

Agree with Ken and Harlan. You don't say who you are or why you're doing this.

Also, you'd have to sell 170,000 tickets just to break even on the properties, excluding marketing costs, wage bill, taxes etc.

Without any brand name recognition and no small print that proves this is registered with the appropriate authorities and complies with the prevailing legislation, it is suspect to say the very least. It looks like something knocked up by an individual, not a company or property developer.

Also, the price tag, 20 euros, is just a little bit too close to the typical scam price tag. You know, "you've won a prize, now phone our premium rate line which will cost you £10 and your prize cost us 50p". It's playing on people's greed.

Jane

I looked at your site elsewhere on this board, and my first thought was that it seemed suspicious. This was before I looked at this thread and the responses here.

So yes, you have to be very careful because of what you are offering. If you're legit, prove it.

I noticed that you have some information deeper within the website, but I wasn't motivated to read it. If there's anything in there that would promote trust, use it up front.

You also mentioned having a $175K advertising budget. Do you really have that much? If so, there's no excuse for not hiring a top-notch copywriter. It *will* make a difference.

Janet

See that Primo? Your such a Knob. : P

Takes one to know one Chucky boy!

What are you going on about Sky? I didn't disagree with you, but I was agreeing with Ken and Harlan re: why it looks suspicious, which is not something you commented on. And Primo just asked questions, that's why he didn't get a mention.

Honestly, do I have to caretake everyone's feelings every time I post? Do I always have to think about how to make you feel better?

If that's not your point, then what is? Or are you just being a knob?

Jane