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You need to have a copy of all the previous versions of your sales letters.

And only make one change at a time -otherwise you will never know what caused the change-and these things are not logical

BTW- I am not an expert but it was advice given to me by a copywriter

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P.S why would you change a 10% conversion rate copy???? for any reason at all???
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Default 05-20-2006, 02:08 PM

Hi Deg.

I don't think I did change the 10% conversion copy.
It just petered out.

Good advice about saving the previous versions.



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Default 05-20-2006, 03:36 PM

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You need to have a copy of all the previous versions of your sales letters.
And only make one change at a time -otherwise you will never know what caused the change-and these things are not logical
BTW- I am not an expert but it was advice given to me by a copywriter
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P.S why would you change a 10% conversion rate copy???? for any reason at all???
The exception to that rule is when a page has never worked well. Then you have little to lose by starting over from a new angle or such.
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Default Re: My Conversion Rate Dumped! - 04-14-2008, 06:44 PM

If you're already using Glyphius.
Try MuVar from Mr Brausch as well.

Costs a lot more than $10, but you should find it well worth it.


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Default Re: My Conversion Rate Dumped! - 05-03-2008, 08:28 PM

Try removing the "**Special Offer**" part at the top. It screams sales pitch. The headline does as well.


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Default Re: My Conversion Rate Dumped! - 05-06-2008, 06:04 AM

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