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Default Tried a couple of new things here... - 04-05-2006, 02:45 PM

Just sold out a second round of this Listing Teleseminar for real estate agents at http://www.GettingListings.com

Tried something new by using Discussion Board screen shots as testimonials.

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Default 04-05-2006, 05:01 PM

1. I like the clean look of the site.

2. Could not read the testis from the forum. Too small and I'm on a large monitor.

3. Like the audio. Is that the Bill Meyer's player?

Good letter. Just work on sizing the forum.
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Default 04-05-2006, 05:46 PM

please look in your private message.

i send you an urgent private message.


The beginner.
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Default 04-05-2006, 10:58 PM

hey harlan...did you see the "click here" below the screen cap? or are you saying it's still too small...even when you enlarge it?
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Default 04-05-2006, 11:19 PM

Dean,

Looks nice, but perhaps making the forum image clickable or saying "click here to see a larger image and additional testimonials" would help?

Also - what about linking to the actual forum where these were posted? It might lend some additional credibility to them since images can be faked so easily these days.



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Default 04-06-2006, 12:43 AM

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hey harlan...did you see the "click here" below the screen cap? or are you saying it's still too small...even when you enlarge it?
Actually, I didn't see it.

THere's too much too read on those posts.

Cut them down and edit them.

It's not all that clear what they are talking about.

Edit them and make them pithy.

Will I see you in Orlando?
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