hi,

I would love to get some feedback on this sales letter. It's for low cost A-B-Split-Tester, aimed mostly for non-professional copywriter (although professionals have used it and been very happy with it).

Here is the url:

http://www.a-b-split-test.com

Please don't hold anything back. Like I said before, you have to be crule to be kind... in the right mesure!

Kristjan

I think it's too long for such a small price. I would cut it down and test to see what gets better results.

Thank you Eric,

I guess there is a lot of unnecessary blabber in there, I could cut out to make it smoother. And get straight to the point.

I'll split test that using a great software I know of

Warm regards,

Kristjan

There's another post in here about sales letters being nothing but bulls$$t. I think one of the main problems is that people think they have to be long. And since you can only write so much interesting stuff on a subject, amatuers (and some experts) start filling in the space with fluff.

I've always had much more success with short letters that are to the point. Quick to show the features (turned into benefits) and without the hype.

But this is for the markets that I've dealt in...it doesn't work everywhere.