Hi there,

Please give me a critique on the sales letter at:

http://www.ClickbankAffiliateConfessions.com

I need:

- headline tweaking examples

- sub-headline tweaking examples

- p.s examples

- money-back guarantee examples...

Anything else that it can be improved, quick, tips, and tricks are welcomed!

Thank you very much.

Codrut Turcanu.

The headline is not all that bad and the audio testimonial is always a good touch. Overall from a glance it looks pretty damn good. The one thing I dont like though is you say you can get the system now at a 50% discount but then you go and slash your price three times before the real price. This looks like you cannot sell your product and are desperate. Instead just use one slash.

I don't know...

If your client is the "Robert Allen" mentality crowd...

I'm hoping you put 5 more slashes.

But how has your testing been going? What are current base results?

I mean, it's hard to do a critique with just "Here, go. Tell me if it's good or bad." You kind of need to know things.

You know?

But you do "get what you pay for" so to speak.

I agree about the slashes - I think just one would be better.

In the sentence that begins, "Plimus sets a 1 year cookie.." I believe
the word "stole" should be 'steal."

Basically, looks pretty good to me! I'd also be interested in
knowing how well it's converting for you.

Kindest regards,

Alan