Hi guys, girls,

I've recently finished a first version of a privacy-related project. I'm still tweaking it as it's being tested - the product is security software that hides files completely.

Any thoughts?

Kind regards
Erik.

Hi Erik,

Welcome to the board while I wait to be welcomed as well.

I just saw your lonely post just like mines and no response so I
decided to give before I receive.

I looked at your website and noticed right away that there were
a couple problems with the grammar. The copy is quite short
as well and I'm not sure what the picture of the "guy" (you?)
really serves. I don't think that it really enhances your message.

I would go for a longer copy and maybe even a facelift for the
layout of the website.

Hope this helped.

Regards,

Ray Edwards