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Default 04-15-2006, 10:39 AM

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Default 05-02-2006, 01:03 AM

Ramon dude,

I'll never understand why writers swipe entire pieces word for word.

Because ultimately, it causes something that's a _huge_ problem. Something (especially in longer "personal" sales processes) that you really don't want.

Namely, an incogruence problem.

I'm guessing you don't think like Gary Halbert, talk like Gary Halbert, or do anything similarly to Gary Halbert.

So, when you actually MEET a woman from that ad, you're going to be meeting someone who EXPECTS to meet someone else.

Quite often it's easy to forget that in the lead generation process of any campaign, you want QUALIFIED leads... because THEY and ONLY THEY will end up buying. So many people kid themselves that their 1000's of leads are "evidence" of a successful campaign.

At the end of the day it's only the leads that buy and the $$$ in the bank that counts.

If the "real ramon" ad pulls in fewer responses, then ****, at least those women will be quaified to meet the "real ramon". Try substituting your own personality for that of Gary Halbert and have some confidence in yourself dude.


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