thanks for the advice ricky.

heres what iv done so far:

Buy Self Esteem Ebook Now - Secrets of Higher Self Esteem and More | Official Site | Nicholas Finnegan


1. I have no idea how to get rid of the right bar, I got this layout from someone else's website. any ideas how i can get rid of it?? im no good at html. If you have the time just take the source code and edit it for me and send it back by email??

4. on my speakers the video audio sounds fine, i wouldnt know how to correct the base problem. is the second video ok for sound or is it the same? I only uploaded it, i never fiddled with the sound.

7. I dont have any money to hire someone to do this. Is there any software that allows me to make one myself??

cheers.

I must say its looking good so far, and i know with your help it would look much better. please don't give up on me yet ricky.

Hi Nicholas,

Both Montello and Ricky have given you some great advice.

The page layout has serious issues that detract from your copy. If you don't get these fixed, revising the copy won't make much difference. You mentioned you haven't got the cash to hire a web designer. So how about offering to trade services? You could go onto e-lance (or other similar sites) and get bids for the job.

Layout issues aside, you need to take things one step further and dimensionalize the benefits the prospect will receive. Like MM said, nobody buys self-esteem. What they buy is the things self-esteem will give them.

The above aside...

The background color still isn't right -- it virtually screams amateur. Try to get it closer to the one this site uses. Or lose the color completely and go with white. But almost anything would be better than the bright cyan...

The header is also non-professional, but Ricky already addressed that...

And finally -- forgive my bluntnesss -- but your headline sucks. "Little Known" and "Secrets" are redundant, and the whole thing reads poorly (try reading it out loud). Maybe go with something along the lines of: