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Default Re: Grabbers - 05-11-2008, 05:05 PM

Jasons' "Ashes" grabber - would go brilliantly with the Jim Rutz Headline -

"Read This Or Die"


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Default Re: Grabbers - 05-12-2008, 01:55 PM

One of the best grabbers we've ever used was a J. Squirrel letter with a bag of airline peanuts and the headline "Are Ya Nuts!" This was the 3rd step of our sequence to people who did not respond to the first two.


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Default Re: Grabbers - 05-12-2008, 02:05 PM

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I love your ideas Jason... problem is after the anthrax scare a few years ago I think you'd have trouble getting ashes and maybe even koolaid through the us mail.
Nothing kills a good idea like a terrorist act.
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Default For Every Great Idea, There is an Equal and Opposite Bad Idea - 05-12-2008, 10:36 PM

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Dear John,

You may be wondering why I've attached a small bag of my fathers ashes to the top of this letter.

You see, not too long ago my dad passed away.


Now, who in the hell wouldn't be somewhat curious about those damn ashes?


Oh geez, I'm going straight to hell.
Yes, Indeed, you may be heading down the Highway to Hell - but you might just be detained in purgatory for a while.

I firmly believe that for every good idea, there is an equal and opposite bad idea. That's why I love brain storming sessions... especially where you say "There are no bad ideas..." -

BS - the ashes are a HORRIBLE Idea..... BUT DAMN FUNNY!!: I do like the way you think.

Ok, for grabbers:

I've used real $2 bills - they're unusual, and stick out in the prospects mind... and are 100% more generous than a $1 bill. You don't get labeled as a cheapskate.

I've also used "message in a bottle" - i got the plastic bottles from "orientaltrading" dot com.. That one did really well, but was sort of expensive to mail. It would be more now, as I did that before last year's rate increase.

I even tried easter eggs for an easter mailing... that didn't go over too well - One sore guy faxed me: "My egg was broken. Stop mailing me this $h!T!!!"
That's ok, I still got orders faxed to me.

Perhaps my favorite, and it was pretty successful (about 5%) was a prescription bottle mailer.

"Here's your prescription for higher profits..." theme.

I got the pill bottles from Ebay, they were about 28 cents each, and with the sales letter crammed into them, were 63 cents to mail.

I think the response rate would have been higher on the prescription mailer if I had sent it in a large envelope, and not crammed a 4 page sales letter and fax sheet into it. They were a pain to get into the bottles, and I'm sure they were a pain to fish out. THen the letter would look like crap b/c it was all wrinkled and creased.

So there are some ideas...

Oh yeah, have you ever got a $1 grabber that says:
"as you can see, I have attached a crisp clean brand new $1 bill to this letter...."?

When in reality, the $1 looks like it's been crammed in some guys wallet for a few weeks, wadded up and thrown on the counter... maybe washed, then crammed back in the wallet...

"As you can see, I've attached an Old Ratty, nearly worthless $1 bill to this letter. You can now ALMOST go out and buy 1 quart of fuel for your automobile, or you can continue reading this letter...."
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