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Default Join today... - 03-30-2005, 01:35 PM

This is a 'thank you' and, I suppose something of a pitch...

I was contacted by someone to improve the performance of a letter he uses to sell a very good product.

After some discussion, I learned that he wrote the letter over 5 years ago, his conversion rate is sky high and he nets six-figures a year from it.

Reluctantly, I took the job with no promise of improvement (as usual - paid in full, in advance, no refunds).

Long story short, the formatting methods that Michel gives away for free are what put the letter over the top.

I'm going to continue working on the copy, but we've already added approximately 1% of pure profit to the bottom line. It's money that will continue to 'just show up', month after month for my client and his employees (raises, bonuses, benefits).

This isn't the first time this has happened...not by a long shot.

Now, I'm going to add what's behind the curtain at Michel's membership site, to the letter...not that I need to. My clinet, is very happy. But since he's a center of influence, I want to blow his doors off by delivering...more money...and so I will.

Ok...ready...here's my pitch: Make your life easier, enjoy the benefits that come as the result of keeping your clients even happier than they are now, keep your clients longer, turn existing clients into evangelical salespeople for your services, put more money in your pocket immediately: CLICK HERE AND JOIN THECOPYDOCTOR.COM RIGHT AWAY!

Thanks Michel.

Peter

P.S. Impacting just one client by improving a 'tough' project can add thousands, and yes, tens of thousands of dollars - pure profit - to your bottom line, this year. As part of celebrating this 'win', I rented a Jag this past weekend. So what the heck are you waiting for, CLICK HERE AND JOIN THECOPYDOCTOR.COM RIGHT NOW! You'll never get 'stuck' again. Click here and join.
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