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Default Diet Pill upsell/continuity Letter examples? - 03-18-2008, 11:25 AM

Does any one have a sample of a good letter that will either up sell them to more bottles or get them on a monthly continuity program?I saw a great letter that went like after 30 days you will feel like this after 60 days your cloth will feel loser after 90 days ect ect ect.


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Default Re: Diet Pill upsell/continuity Letter examples? - 03-18-2008, 05:46 PM

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Does any one have a sample of a good letter that will either up sell them to more bottles or get them on a monthly continuity program?I saw a great letter that went like after 30 days you will feel like this after 60 days your cloth will feel loser after 90 days ect ect ect.


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I believe the Vincent James manual goes into detail about this.

Also look at the methods used by slimming clubs (Weightwatchers, etc) to entend the lenght of their memberships.

But don't go down the route of forced continuity. If you do you'll end up in a 14'x7' with Bubba, and you is gonna be his bee-yitch...
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Default Re: Diet Pill upsell/continuity Letter examples? - 03-20-2008, 08:19 PM

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Does any one have a sample of a good letter that will either up sell them to more bottles or get them on a monthly continuity program?I saw a great letter that went like after 30 days you will feel like this after 60 days your cloth will feel loser after 90 days ect ect ect.


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Agora mails such letters from time to time. If you can find a swipe file from them, you'll be served
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Default Re: Diet Pill upsell/continuity Letter examples? - 09-15-2008, 03:50 PM

Garrett, why wouldn't you do forced continuity?

This goes against what 99% of the sites are doing. Almost every diet pill site uses the forced continuity model


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Default Re: Diet Pill upsell/continuity Letter examples? - 09-15-2008, 04:44 PM

Buy something from www.healthresources.net and watch them in action. Very effective online and offline marketing model.
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Default Re: Diet Pill upsell/continuity Letter examples? - 09-15-2008, 04:58 PM

I noticed they don't have auto-shipping (continuity).

They offer you a better deal on multiple items and free shipping on orders over a certain amount.

They sell their own brand only, the benefit of private label is you can sell at a higher price point. and not directly compete with others.
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Default Re: Diet Pill upsell/continuity Letter examples? - 09-15-2008, 05:28 PM

I see nothing wrong with forced continuity as long as you're upfront about it and people know what they're buying into. Its the guys that bury the details in the fine print and hit you with charges you don't expect that should be taken out back and shot - or at least tortured for a little while.

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