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Default Help the Noob... Call to action! - 02-06-2008, 01:18 PM

Dear Guru's,

I have come to this forum in the hope of turning around my business. Over the next few weeks you will see me posting a lot of questions here I hope I don't over do it but im dead set on making my business a success!

I am marketing a web design training package and I have 3 actions I would like my visitor to take. Either sign up for a demo, complete a form for a consultant to give them a call or buy the product.

Am I over complicating things here? Should I just make the call to action to buy the course and list my freephone number on the page?

I am thinking of removing the demo and replacing it with a video of me using the course and talking people through the features. Is this a bad move? I want to improve the quality of my leads but dont want to lose people details who I may have been able to close.

Many thanks in advance for taking the time.

PS I have posted a job for this but not sure if I will get any takers due to my budget so really appreciate your help.
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Default Re: Help the Noob... Call to action! - 02-06-2008, 01:54 PM

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Dear Guru's,

I have come to this forum in the hope of turning around my business. Over the next few weeks you will see me posting a lot of questions here I hope I don't over do it but im dead set on making my business a success!

I am marketing a web design training package and I have 3 actions I would like my visitor to take. Either sign up for a demo, complete a form for a consultant to give them a call or buy the product.

Am I over complicating things here? Should I just make the call to action to buy the course and list my freephone number on the page?

I am thinking of removing the demo and replacing it with a video of me using the course and talking people through the features. Is this a bad move? I want to improve the quality of my leads but dont want to lose people details who I may have been able to close.

Many thanks in advance for taking the time.

PS I have posted a job for this but not sure if I will get any takers due to my budget so really appreciate your help.

No idea what the 'Guru's' will say but speaking as a consumer who has bought numerous packages online it was always the Ad that sold me but the demo was nice to confirm whether I could actually operate the program myself. A video might not enable the buyer to know that? Perhaps offer them both.

Perhaps see what the others who sell this type of course are doing?
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Default Re: Help the Noob... Call to action! - 02-06-2008, 02:58 PM

Adding an opt-in box for an autoresponder series would be helpful too.

For example, you could have a series of seven e-mails about something like "Top 7 Mistakes that Web Designers Make." That way you capture the e-mail addresses of people who are interested, but not interested enough to sign up for a demo at that moment.

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Default Re: Help the Noob... Call to action! - 02-06-2008, 10:10 PM

Where's yer site??


I've got it, You need it, I'm selling it at:
http://copyforsale.com - The Copywriter Come True

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Default Re: Help the Noob... Call to action! - 02-07-2008, 07:46 AM

its a new site still in development and not been launched yet:

Webmaster Training | Web Design Courses | Flash Training | HTML Training

I wrote the original copy after reading a 3 page tutorial on sales letters so its pretty bad and im re-doing the template to be "liquid". Since then I have read 2 really good books on direct response marketing so my next draft which I am working on now should be a big improvement.

I was selling this package on another site but the business partnership went bad so I am starting from scratch again.

Creative - my main competition make appointments and send sales people to customers house to make the close, others have expensive "drop in" centres. My package costs 25% of what they charge which I can do by working every hour in the day and keeping my overheads to a minimum lol. Im thinking of including copy naming like 3 of the biggest training companies in the UK and inviting my visitors to get a quote and compare the training. I bought an ecommerce platform recently and thats what the sales person did to me, he gave me all his competitors and then listed the reasons why his product was better. I had a quick look at one of them but the confidence the salesperson put across sold the product to me. Not 100% sure this will work tho.

Anita - thats a great idea, I was wondering what subject to set my auto responder on and I think I have found it now!
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Default Re: Help the Noob... Call to action! - 02-07-2008, 08:59 AM

G,

Those points you made to me about what the comeptition does are very good lures to get people to buy your product

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Buy in your own time online, no home visits, no high pressured sales men will call and up to 25% less than my biggest competitior!

Something likle that, I'm no CW, but I think those points you made are things the customer may like to know.

Meanwhile, Ads on sites like mine can bring in sales. I can put a link on mine if you like. It's called A Technophobes Guide To The Internet and I have just started earning from Adsense, so people are finally clicking the Ads on my sites (about time too)

The site is appropriate for your product. I have a few links on my sites and in some cases I am their top referrer. It's all about how the link is placed etc. For example on X-Posed blog (about relationships) I refer traffic to a site called blog dumps. The way I get my traffic to go there is by having a banner thing saying:
'see why I got dumped here'

You can see why people click it, play on words given nature of my site.

Anyway, Good luck with the business and pm me your link/banner etc. I'll run an Ad for a month for free. If you get some sales as a result we can discuss further placement arangements.
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