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Default Title Copywriting- Can you help me pick my title for my new product? - 07-10-2007, 10:51 PM

Hey everyone, im in a big dilemma over what title I should choose for my new info product and it would be great if you can give your suggestions on which title you like the best. I just need suggestions on the title endings, and they are as follows:
1. Secrets
2. Cash
3. Profits

For example, "Google Secrets,” or “Google Cash,” or “Google Profits.” Which title endings do you like the best out of the three given? They all have their strengths and weaknesses, and most of these titles endings have been repeatedly used which im aware of, but I believe that they can tie into the product that im selling nicely.

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Default Re: Title Copywriting- Can you help me pick my title for my new product? - 07-10-2007, 11:00 PM

It's hard to go wrong with "cash" There are a lot of successful products using that name, Glyphius likes it, I like it.

Of course the real way to find out is to spend $50 to test it in an AdWords campaign going to a squeeze page.

Run 3 ads like:

Google Cash
Make money with google
www.mysite.com


Google Profits
Make money with google
www.mysite.com

Google Secrets
Make money with google
www.mysite.com

Get it? Everything the same but the word you'r testing. Let Google rotate them for you and wait for significant results. Tests don't lie.
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Default Re: Title Copywriting- Can you help me pick my title for my new product? - 07-12-2007, 12:13 AM

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It's hard to go wrong with "cash" There are a lot of successful products using that name, Glyphius likes it, I like it.

Of course the real way to find out is to spend $50 to test it in an AdWords campaign going to a squeeze page.

Run 3 ads like:

Google Cash
Make money with google
www.mysite.com


Google Profits
Make money with google
www.mysite.com

Google Secrets
Make money with google
www.mysite.com

Get it? Everything the same but the word you'r testing. Let Google rotate them for you and wait for significant results. Tests don't lie.
Thanks for the idea! The idea never crossed my mind to test titles for products the same way I do for headlines, ok off to work.

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Default Re: Title Copywriting- Can you help me pick my title for my new product? - 07-12-2007, 02:09 AM

My hunch is "Google Secrets" will out pull all others by a large margin.
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Default Re: Title Copywriting- Can you help me pick my title for my new product? - 07-12-2007, 10:10 AM

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My hunch is "Google Secrets" will out pull all others by a large margin.

Do I smell a bet? LOL!

Actually, I like "secrets" and "cash". I could argue either way. I don't really like profits.

Keep in mind that his prefix word is NOT Google though. That may have some influence on how effective it would be.
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