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Default Failing copy...........help needed! - 01-24-2007, 11:40 AM

Hi - I have several niche ebook websites and I wrote the copy for both.

One is converting at 0.75% which although profitable should be better.

The other is performing at 0.2% and losing money through Adwords traffic.

I was hoping to hire someone who could help me to hone this salesletters
to convert at least 1-2%.

Any ideas or recommendations?

Thanks for your help

John
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Default Re: Failing copy...........help needed! - 01-24-2007, 12:14 PM

Hi, John.

If you're looking to hire a copywriter, you may find this thread useful for contact information:

http://www.copywritersboard.com/copy...i-missing.html

Most copywriters here would most likely have little problem increasing your conversion, but obviously they'd want to talk to you first (I always talk with clients to better understand your needs, not just that you'd like to increase your conversion, which is a given, and I suspect most others here do something similar).

Best Regards,

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Default Re: Failing copy...........help needed! - 01-24-2007, 01:32 PM

I have done marvelous things for people when writing copy. I have a few samples I can show you that are hitting big for me. One such example can be found at Copywriting That Brings Results. Take a look at that copy and compare it to yours. I'm constantly getting work from that page.

Let me know if I can help you in anyway possible. If you like what I've done, I give you a break pricing wise.

Take care.

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Default Re: Failing copy...........help needed! - 01-30-2007, 04:43 AM

Hi John,

It may be worth checking out this 100% guaranteed copywriting/split testing service...
4 Changes to your website sales copy written, split tested and guaranteed to increase your sales

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Default Re: Failing copy...........help needed! - 01-31-2007, 12:39 AM

I'm sure there are plenty of us who'd be happy to give a critique. Would you mind posting links so we could have a look?
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Default Re: Failing copy...........help needed! - 01-31-2007, 09:50 AM

It's hard to do a critique, tell you what's wrong, or suggest how we could improve the copy, without seeing what you've got. Can you post a link so we can take a look? As for generalities, look at your headline. Does it refer to your target audience? Is your offer strong? With your adwords traffic, have you checked to make sure your keywords are actually being searched for?

Send us a link, and we'll get under the hood and see what's going on.

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James


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Default Re: Failing copy...........help needed! - 01-31-2007, 08:57 PM

Are the niche sites offering something your market wants?

All the copy in the world can't sell something no one wants.

Believe me, I've tried


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