Anyone see this?

Is $30K In 30 Days Possible For You?

good copy/layout etc.. feedback?

interesting format -- pitched for the IM folks...


Ken

Not a single one of those "masters" (in the top picture) looks like they're having any fun at all.

Yeah, it looks like a police lineup -- same with all the other pictures on the page. What's up with that? Not a single smile? They must have told them to be serious.

Bad joke removed for being a bad joke.

Message removed, where I told Vin I loved him, but
the bad joke might get him in more trouble than it's worth

Thanks, Vin!

Ken,

I knew that I didn't like the new pic over the old one.

And, looking at the new one again, I can see why people talk about a police lineup -- it's that red-line that run behind folks' foreheads.

The "above the fold" stuff seems unbalanced to me, as if it's almost a strain to read the "On March 23" line, because the pic and the black headline pull my eye away from it. (but then, that could have something to do with the fact that I am ALSO looking down, not up, at my computer screen, as is characteristic for notebook users...)

For me, it's too much.

And I do buy IM products.

(I was also at the seminar where these bright guys decided to make this product...

You're right judy. I removed it.

Damn, late for the party. Vin, PM the joke to me. I promise to enjoy it no matter how distasteful