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Default Unique Squeeze page pulling about 40%... - 11-10-2006, 06:25 AM

I decided to try something different with this squeeze page. Even though I'm not exactly talented with graphics (have at it if you'd like Mr. Subtle), it's doing quite well.

I'm split testing the page, one of the pages has been consistently in the mid 40's, the other about 30%.

Just thought you guys might like to take a look. Maybe give me advice to clean up the design a little.

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Default 11-12-2006, 06:21 AM

Not interesting to anyone?

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Default 11-12-2006, 06:30 AM

It's 3:30 AM in the states right now. Since most who participate in the board are in this hemisphere... well, just hold your horses. I'm sure after some folk wake up and have their coffee, you'll get some responses.


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Default 11-12-2006, 11:59 AM

I like it. It's different. Should you still test different headlines, etc.? Sure.

But the biggest thing you have going for you (and I suspect the main reason for your decent opt in rates) is the offer.

I signed up. I'm always on the lookout for new split test software to try out, so even though I clicked on your list and saw a different squeeze page, I still signed up, once I saw your split test software is included there as well. That's a testament to your offer.

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Default 11-12-2006, 03:48 PM

Stephen,
Overall I'll tell you, I love the graphics and the tidy way you've pieced it all together.

Like John, I would test the headline with others... good job!
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