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Default Armand Morin's Cleverly Written Email... - 10-27-2006, 12:33 PM

Do I agree with everything AM does? Nope...

Like some -- don't others.

That's not the point.

Here's an email that -- in my opinion -- WORKS!

Check it out...

Better yet -- think how you could use something similar in your business or for your clients. I know I am.

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Subject: BigSeminar 8...It Started This Morning...


From: Armand Morin
Re: BigSeminar 8 Started This Morning!


http://www.big seminar.com


Dear My Friend,


For whatever reason, you were not able to attend.
Only you know the reason and you're the only one
who needs to know.


Actually, maybe your life is where you want it...it's
not up to us, or anyone else, to make that decision for
you.


But if it's not...don't give up hope.


Take charge of your life in your own way...determine
your own destiny!


And...


If you are still serious about Internet Marketing...start
planning for BigSeminar 9!


BigSeminar 9 will be held in Atlanta, GA on the 27th, 28th
and 29th of April 2007.


That's only 181 days away. (Don't worry...I won't be sending
you an email counting down each day between now and then)



Admission will be $1997 USD. That's only $11.03 per day.


Can you put aside $11.02 a day in order to change your
future?


What can you do to create $11.02 a day?


- Cut out snacks - You'll save money and drop pounds!
- Stop Smoking - You'll save money and become healthier!
- Shop with coupons and set aside the amount you save
- Cut down on dinning out - You'll eat healthier
- Cut down or stop going to the bar between now and then
- Invest in your future - hide a little from each paycheck


(Once you build your business you can go out and party as
much as you want.)


Find a friend to go with you and sign the friend up as your
guest. They get in for 1/2 price as a guest. Let's see
how this shakes out.


Your Ticket... $1997.00
Your Guest... $998.50
** TOTAL... -> $2995.50


Divide that by 2 and you arrive at $1497 each. That's
only $8.27 per day, each!


These, plus many more, are simple actions you can take.


They're simple...but they may not always be easy...Yes
you may have to sacrifice a little...BUT IT'S WORTH IT!


We'll notify you as soon as BigSeminar 9 is ready for
Registration!



See you in Atlanta at BigSeminar 9!


Best of Success,


Armand Morin
http://www.big seminar.com



9660 Falls Of Neuse Rd.
Suite 138 #181
Raleigh, NC 27615
USA



This is a commercial eMail Communication with our friends
who have requested more information on our products, our
trainings and on BigSeminar

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Default 10-27-2006, 02:36 PM

Well, it is an interesting email, if nothing else.

But the person who has to put away $11 a day, isn't a person with discipline anyway. A person with discipline would be able to pay for anything they want, because they'd have the money saved up.

While I can appreciate his tactic of wanting to get the next set of sign ups, the same goal can be achieved by other means.


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