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Bard Junior Member Posts: 27 Join Date: Oct 2006 Rep Power: 0 Friends: 0	Is this version of IL letter better or worst? - 10-22-2006, 09:42 AM I just got an online promo. Check this: Copywriters Board It doesn't impress me. I prefer the older version. Any thought? Bard

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John_S Master Posts: 605 Join Date: Dec 2004 Rep Power: 4 Friends: 1	10-22-2006, 11:20 AM My thought is, if this is being rolled out in any large numbers, it tested better. My preferences are irrelevant. Check out the first two reports in The Copywriters Hoard... How to Find the “Selling Story” Buried in Your Business What would Direct Response Graphic Design look like? And you can get the rest ...ask me how when we discuss your project

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Rob Junior Member Posts: 19 Join Date: Dec 2003 Rep Power: 0 Friends: 0	The older one hands down! - 10-22-2006, 03:02 PM I would say the older one is better. The older version is much easier to read, the format and layout flows! With the new version your eyes are all over the place. Rob Sanders Last edited by Rob; 10-22-2006 at 03:05 PM.

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