I'm about to launch my new software, PowerWords Generator.

This the is "copywriter's thesaurus" where it searches for, and recommends alternatives to, words in your copy using a highlighting and suggestion tool. It highlights words that can be replaced with more exciting, more powerful, more impacting words, suggested in a drop-down list for each word.

(It also builds its own database of potential alternatives and "learns" as it grows.)

The first draft was written by our very own Stephen Davies. However, the software has gone through many advancements and upgrades, and has been completely ported to a standalone application for any PC or computer.

Plus, Stephen wrote it a year ago, and he did it quite quickly (my request since it was since put on hold until the new changes have been implemented, and it was only a rough draft by Stephen).

So I need...

1) the copy to be revised, cleaned up and jazzed up...
2) Opt-in form copy (before they hit the site), and...
3) Autoresponder copy to be written, perhaps 5-7 emails.

I want it to be similar to my other copy for A New Breakthrough Technology That Combines The Power Of Google AdSense And Clickbank (check it out to see what I mean).

Any takers? I'm willing to pay for the extra copy. Just a few things.

1. Stephen was made (displayed as) author of the copy. That stays. It's a strategic move. I prefer someone else selling us, rather than the copy coming from me. (It was an arrangement I made with Stephen, and I'd like to keep honoring it.)

2. While I might have a say on the revised copy, I also want Stephen to have a say, too, since it's his copy.

Simply PM me if you're interested.

Also, if you're interested in helping us selling the software for a 51% commission, please let my partner know: John Tanner at intelnexus2000@yahoo.com

Thanks!

Michel,

I sent you a PM

I would be interested

Jack

I won't be able to respond to all PM's, but I will diligently go through them all and also consult with Stephen first, as he has a say on his copy

WARNING to Michel!

It'll be good -- but you may end up wearing a costume or with a bird on your shoulder.

As you know, Jack's copy (tied with Leah Carson) pulled on the JV Hotseats promotion.

I would like to give some input here...

When I wrote this copy almost a year ago, it was only my second salesletter I had ever written...

so Jack, when you see it, please forgive the amatuerish way I wrote the copy

I will say that the original version of this software was absolutely spectacular!

When the new version comes out it would do everyone some good to check it out... absolutely amazing!

I spoke with Michael Senoff on the phone the other day and told him about this software and he was very interested in it...

I've spoken (discreetly) with other marketers about this software and I can assure you that there is some great interest in seeing it in action.

Wait until you see it folks...

It will blow you away!

-- and thanks Michel for giving me the opportunity of getting the original draft together for you... it was an honor!

Michel Fortin ... a nice french name

I am picturing a little moustache ...

A beret (so you don't have to grow your hair back)

A tight striped shirt

walking one of those litle sissy french poodles

what do ya think?

Jack

Hey Stephen,

I would be honored to pick up where you left off

I won't put any funny characters ,, unless you want me to

Jack

I just sent you a PM giving you the link to the original copy.

Do whatever you and Michel agree on -- let me know how it goes!